Defenitely needs more time and promo, people will support it! You should probably try Patreon instead of Kickstarter. Think about, the art is great and story interesting. Perhaps reconsider a little the amount of monologue, dialogue and actions. Good luck!
crying, vomiting, banging my head against the wall, ITS ALWAYS THE GOOD ONES OMG...i shouldve donated a organ fr. maybe it needs more time, i say give it one more chance cause hey it just needs more exposure.
i enjoyed the demo!! the art was SUPER impressive, seriously. i love the plot, going on a road trip always seems so new and exciting and even just the demo gave me that feeling a bit. I dunno why some comments don't seem to like it, I think that the english was fine and didnt seem robotic at all! maybe i'm just used to it but it read fine in my brain! i hope you get more reach and more people find it so your kickstarter's funded!
a lot of good story going, but not sure if it's worth what the kickstarter is asking for based on the limited interaction of the demo here. it just concerns me that there won't be nearly enough interest to reach the funding goal. good luck.
I think this has great potential, but there is something wonky about the English translation. It's not very bad, but it sounds robotic. It's like the characters are reading from scripts. You should consider getting a native English speaker to edit your English translation.
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this is still on my mind, the potential this had was so huge. the characters pulled me in.
seems really interesting^
Defenitely needs more time and promo, people will support it! You should probably try Patreon instead of Kickstarter. Think about, the art is great and story interesting. Perhaps reconsider a little the amount of monologue, dialogue and actions. Good luck!
I hope you reconsider relaunching this project, the art is amazing!
The story is sooooo good .OMG I hope the team tries this project again in the future, I'll look forward to it.
crying, vomiting, banging my head against the wall, ITS ALWAYS THE GOOD ONES OMG...i shouldve donated a organ fr. maybe it needs more time, i say give it one more chance cause hey it just needs more exposure.
hoping success for this game its so good
Omg! this is so impressive, i'll wait for the full game
Старт хороший, Рин. Удачи :)
This vn has a lot of potential. I actually enjoyed it! The art is incredible btw
i enjoyed the demo!! the art was SUPER impressive, seriously. i love the plot, going on a road trip always seems so new and exciting and even just the demo gave me that feeling a bit. I dunno why some comments don't seem to like it, I think that the english was fine and didnt seem robotic at all! maybe i'm just used to it but it read fine in my brain! i hope you get more reach and more people find it so your kickstarter's funded!
a lot of good story going, but not sure if it's worth what the kickstarter is asking for based on the limited interaction of the demo here. it just concerns me that there won't be nearly enough interest to reach the funding goal. good luck.
omg i just ran into a gem
I think this has great potential, but there is something wonky about the English translation. It's not very bad, but it sounds robotic. It's like the characters are reading from scripts. You should consider getting a native English speaker to edit your English translation.
Finally it is out! ❤️
Sfw or Nsfw? Is there explict sex?
Hello! The demo is SFW!
Oh.
This looks so interesting. I need a download button. (is the demo unfinished or simply me being stupid to not find it???)
Hello! Thank you! Demo version will be released on March 12th!
Oh! I see. Thanks!